WF scenario

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Yes, air strikes are the best way to represent airpower. The only problem that I see are the scout planes Allied can't be downed(at least in the NML5 scenario) Axis planes are easily shot out of the sky. That will need to be tested in your scenario.
The other is (as you mentioned) scout planes may not work at all. I can just imagine a line of transport trucks or a transport train being discovered. A squad of bombers sent out and then a wiped out convoy. Game over!

The Storyline is pretty good! Believable.

Para troopers good! I liked them in NML5. It will be interesting how VV changes things.

You took out the rail guns and gun cars, which is okay. TheNML5 scenario had a smorgasbord of units one does not usually see.

Actually, I think your map is a big improvement over NML5. Rail lines (big improvement) NML5 had them going every which way.